Essentially. It could use some updating. Something catchier and less basic.
[Gotta critique everything]
I don't know about you, but I have a company to run and time is money. [It was evident that he was itching to take over the reigns again. Mostly he was worried about his brother- but didn't say so.] What pressing business do you have?
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[Gotta critique everything]
I don't know about you, but I have a company to run and time is money. [It was evident that he was itching to take over the reigns again. Mostly he was worried about his brother- but didn't say so.] What pressing business do you have?